spring returns
like a poet coming back to life
damp and cold in the morning
warm and bright at midday
sharp and crusty in the evening
dark at midnight
Posted in: NaPoWriMo
Good writing, with a strong point and with life oozing out.
spring returns
like a poet coming back to life
damp and cold in the morning
warm and bright at midday
sharp and crusty in the evening
dark at midnight
Posted in: NaPoWriMo
“sharp and crusty in the evening” — that is such a fantastic choice of words. In the weirdest way, I know exactly what you mean, even though I would never have thought to use the word crusty to describe this feeling. Really great observations, Mike.