Two minutes to ten
last call at Chipotle
means I get
the final burrito
I say ‘carnitas’
but she’s tired too
so piles up pollo
then winces
Smilingly sorry,
reaching for the pork,
she says, ‘carnitas, right?’
right.
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Good writing, with a strong point and with life oozing out.
Two minutes to ten
last call at Chipotle
means I get
the final burrito
I say ‘carnitas’
but she’s tired too
so piles up pollo
then winces
Smilingly sorry,
reaching for the pork,
she says, ‘carnitas, right?’
right.
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Har!
Wait a minute! Are these all original? I think I need to see attribution, even for the humble among us.