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Double Portion

August 26, 2005

Two minutes to ten
last call at Chipotle
means I get
the final burrito

I say ‘carnitas’
but she’s tired too
so piles up pollo
then winces

Smilingly sorry,
reaching for the pork,
she says, ‘carnitas, right?’
right.

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One Response to “Double Portion”

  1. kate says:

    Har!
    Wait a minute! Are these all original? I think I need to see attribution, even for the humble among us.

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