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July 28, 2005

the wind blows
but we can’t see it

we see things

grasses undulate
ferns quiver

an alluring plastic bag
floating in traffic

waves of raindrops
pulsing down the street

umbrellas buckle
signs vibrate

we see signs
when the wind blows

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2 Responses to “Pneuma”

  1. sonja says:

    very nice … I like the double entendre in the title.

  2. Erin says:

    This poem reminds me of the boyfriend/neighbor/film artiste in the movie “American Beauty”

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